Grace inside a black hole
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I wake inside a black hole
whose escape velocity
surpasses that of light
it is all loneliness
a directionless void
of pulsing energy
I am running out of fuel
unable to support Vision
this collapse is mine
I have crossed the horizon
there is no going back
I am sucked into singularity
Or am I? All around me
circles of rainbow light
reverse my destructive patterning
My feet pull one direction,
my head another but
You tesseract my heart
No one outside can see You
separate me, transport me
from inside this frozen star
I am Your Witness, so
nearly crushed to death
Eight minutes is all it takes
You transform me from singularity
creating the duality of wave particles
with principled Uncertainty
Complex though it may seem
simplicity renders perfect
the coincidence of my wave
I travel faster than light
when You are with me
You and your circles of grace
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Yeah!!! I love this!!! lilyfly
I like it very much.
Thank you prasetio, maggs and MartieC. It is interesting to discover how others read poetry. I appreciate your comments.
Story, I tend to read poems subjectively – always see it as a mirror of my own emotions- emotions struggling to be recognised and accepted by me as an existence not to be ignored but to be cherished, because it is me in a specific mood. When reading a poem objectively, I often have no idea what inspired the poet to write the poem. I merely realise that her/his emotions exposed in the poem is replicas of some of my own. I’m sending you a hug on the next cyber wave.
I don't understand a lot of this it is a bit above my head, but much to my surprise that has not stopped me loving it.
I just loved the easy rhythm and flow of the words and the sense of grace and lifting that this poem gave to me.
Beautiful poem. The tittle impress me much and make me curious to find out more about the poem. Good work, my friend. Vote up.~prasetio
loriamoore, you create a funny image. Thanks!
Without God's grace, I'd fall on my butt, but instead I fall on my face praising Him.
Amanda, that is high praise indeed. I am so grateful.
Sunshiney31, yes! And more.
I di understand who You is you gave Him a wonderful praise.Thank you for sharing this moving hub.I have on many occasions found myself in this exact same place,in His grace :)
I don't altogether understand this, but I love the ebb and flow of the words. There is almost a tidal quality to the imagery.
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Storytellersrus Hub Author 15 months ago
Thanks for stopping. It is always interesting to reread my stuff and remember. You drew me back.